March 1, 2012

Warning signs of the world #1: When Bambi attacks – Nara, Japan

Freelance Unbound’s roving correspondent is currently in Japan, seeking out linguistic and visual communications curiosities for your cultural pleasure. 

Yesterday’s trip to the ancient Japanese capital of Nara – a UNESCO World Heritage site packed with fabulous Spirited Away-style scenery – yielded these sinister warnings about the possibility of deer attack.

Yes – Bambi can turn in a heartbeat. Be afraid – be very afraid…

February 27, 2012

Comic books and Hollywood promote illiteracy #1: Iron Man

Marvel Studios may have spent around $140,000,000 to put Iron Man on the screen, but none of that money seems to have gone on proofreading.

As Iron Man seems to be showing pretty much on a loop on Film 4 at the moment, sub-editing geeks can check out the montage of magazine covers featuring millionaire businessman/inventor Tony Stark during the awards ceremony a little way into the movie.

Oops – that Forbes cover makes the reins/reigns subbing blooper that longstanding readers of this very blog were warned about back in 2008. It just goes to show that you can never spend too much time honing your accuracy (or reading Freelance Unbound).

So – you may be a terrific movie director, Jon Favreau, but be aware you are corrupting the youth of the western world with your sloppy proofreading…

February 22, 2012

Marie Colvin – a sketchy timeline

Veteran foreign correspondent Marie Colvin has been reported killed today in Syria, alongside French photographer Remi Ochlik. Biographical details online are scant – but here’s a sketchy timeline (UPDATE: Wikipedia caught up with her today, but I’m updating here anyway).

1956/57* – born in Oyster Bay, New York

1974 – graduates from Oyster Bay High School in New York

Studies at Yale University

Crime reporter for the United Press Agency in New York

1984 – becomes Paris bureau chief for United Press International

1985 – joins The Sunday Times

1986 – becomes Middle East correspondent

1995 – becomes Foreign Affairs correspondent

December 1999 – covers Chechnya conflict in the Russian republic. Alongside a group of Chechen rebels, she was “repeatedly attacked by Russian jet fighters”

October* 2000 – receives “Courage in Journalism” award from the International Women’s Media Foundation for behind the lines reporting in Kosova and Chechnya

March 2001 – wins “Foreign Reporter of the Year” in British Press Awards for her coverage of the conflict in Yugoslavia

17 April 2001 – ambushed by government forces in Sri Lanka. Shrapnel injuries result in the loss of her left eye

23 March 2010 – wins “Foreign Reporter of the Year” for the second time

22 February 2012 – reported killed in Homs, Syria in an artillery attack

*estimates

New York Daily News

www.ktrajasingham.net

Oyster Bay Enterprise-Pilot

IWMF

February 21, 2012

Six interview tips for journalism university candidates

Last week saw interviews of a few dozen prospective candidates for places on the journalism degrees at UCA in Farnham. It was the usual mixed bunch, and some candidates failed to shine – despite the fact that is isn’t that hard, if you know what you’re doing.

So, how do you make the best impression in your interview for a university journalism course? Here are six tips.

  1. Research what’s in the news
    Because, you know, we’re going to ask you about it. Most candidates realised we would do this – but still a bit more preparation would have done them good. Of note: the sports journalism candidates who weren’t aware of the Rangers administration story that week.
  2. Keep a blog
    No one does this anymore, because blogging is so 2004. But if you decide at some point during your A Levels that your burning ambition is to be a journalism student, then getting a blog off the ground and keeping it going for a few months is a key thing to convince us you mean it.
  3. Put together an interesting portfolio 
    Rather than a few scrappy printouts, give us a nice, scrapbook style portfolio with a whole range of creative things in it. The best I saw was actually partly a photography portfolio. It was creative and attractive – and crucially revealed that the candidate could communicate through images. It’s a good indication of whether they could communicate with words too.
  4. Talk us through your portfolio with enthusiasm
    Have something to say about the work you’ve done. How did you research it? What did you learn by doing it? How could you do things better? What did you enjoy about it? The work itself is only one part of what we’re looking for from you.
  5. Have an idea what journalism actually is
    Many candidates did quite well on this. But still some will um and ah, and others will say things like: “journalism is about telling people your opinions”. Find out what journalists think journalism is and then tell us that’s what you think it is. Even if you really just want to tell people your opinions.
  6. Ask questions
    Every interview everywhere finishes with “do you have any questions”. For God’s sake have some. Yes – you can ask about the course. But, to shine, ask questions about journalism itself. The best question I got was about privacy and how legitimate I thought the coverage about Whitney Houston’s bathroom death was. It was a tough question to which I don’t have a fully thought-out answer. Be that candidate.

As a side note: journalism is one of those peculiar trades that are heavily over-subscribed by deluded youngsters, who believe it is glamorous and exciting – while it is also imploding financially thanks to problems with its business model. This means there are few jobs, mostly which do not pay well.

If you only realise this once you graduate, don’t blame us. Ask what the state of the journalism job market is at your university interview. If we aren’t straight with you, then you can get the lawyers in…

February 15, 2012

Five tips for success in sports journalism from Times football editor Tony Evans

Last week, Times football editor Tony Evans (@TonyEvansTimes) came to speak to journalism undergraduates at UCA Farnham. Here is his advice to J-students on how to get ahead in sports reporting. (Works for other kinds of journalism too…)

  • Build contacts
    Don’t be shy – make contact with people in the sporting and media world via email and Twitter; and maintain your contacts with regular calls and meets. 
  • Write about more than football
    Get experience on news (i.e. non sport) at local level – it’s excellent preparation. Also write about topics such as business. Be a broader journalist to be a better football writer.
  • Be confident – but have some humility 
    It’s great to push yourself forward – but don’t write to the football editor and say “I can do a better job than your football correspondent – he’s rubbish”. You’re probably wrong and you will look a tool. Be polite and persistent to get noticed. 
  • Blog
    Keep your online presence going – it’s a great opportunity to show what you can do 
  • Aim high
    Always think you can be the best (or at least be better)

What’s more important – contacts or prose style?
Contacts – always. Evans cited an example of a young journalist who was a great writer, but was shy – “he didn’t really like talking to people he didn’t know”. In contrast, another young journalist wrote “English as a second language” – but he was plugged into his club and always got stories. Guess who was in the firing line when the next round of job cuts hit?

Are there still opportunities for student football writers?
Evans sees his job as being on the lookout for the next generation of writing talent – if as an editor you’re not in that business, you shouldn’t be doing the job. Follow the tips above and there’s every chance you can succeed…

February 11, 2012

Bad Logic: why Ben Goldacre’s 5 Tweets against Simon Burns’ ‘moronic’ NHS comment makes no sense*

Bad Science author Ben Goldacre is getting in a twist about the NHS reforms. On his Posterous blog he criticises health minister Simon Burns for recently pointing out that the British Medical Association was hostile to the NHS in 1946 (though I can’t find an actual link for Burns’ comment).

In a neat “5 Tweet” format, Goldacre claims to skewer Burns’ point and show why it is “moronic”. But, irrespective of the merits or otherwise of whatever the NHS reforms actually are, Goldacre’s rebuttal doesn’t really stand up.

In order, then, let’s look at Goldacre’s five Tweets and try to critique them using the tools of logical reasoning. Thanks go to the excellent logic primer on the atheist/rationalist web site Infidels.org. (Wikipedia also has a more complete list of logical fallacies and definitions here.)

1. This was another world, SEVENTY years ago. An era when some in the royal family supported the Nazis.

There are two flaws here. By implication, this is using the argumentum ad novitatem – “the fallacy of asserting that something is better or more correct simply because it is new, or newer than something else”. In another world, all of 70 years ago, our decisions about organising our health system may have been better or worse than they became in 1948. But Goldacre’s point does not address this at all. It plays on a sense of short-termism that believes old stuff must be bad because all of human life must be progress.

There’s also the non sequitur fallacy where the conclusion is “drawn from premises which aren’t logically connected with it”. So the fact that some people in the Royal Family in the 1930s were seduced by Nazism has tainted the way that healthcare was organised before the NHS was created. Yeah, right.

2.  Doctors in the 1890s, 1920s went into a profession of freelancers. Doctors today sign up at age 17 for a lifetime in the NHS, and have done for generations.

An odd reversal of the argumentum ad novitatem in Tweet 1. This is a kind of argumentum ad antiquitatem –  the fallacy of asserting that something is right or good simply because it’s old, or because “that’s the way it’s always been”.

Here’s the thing – special interest groups (and medical professionals are a special interest group, as well as being angels in human form) very often oppose change that will – or just may – alter their professional or financial status.

So doctors who were used to being freelance before 1948 were against the change to their status caused by the introduction of the NHS. And doctors who were reliant professionally on the NHS after 1948 will be against any change to their status caused by the current NHS reforms. This is inevitable. It doesn’t – by itself – prove which change is better.

Signing up at 17 for a lifetime in any organisation will make you resistant to change. Which is why a lot of Russians still miss the Soviet Union.

3. Imagine nationalising the work of all accountants, or all lawyers, right now, today. Good luck getting them on board with that plan, ever.

OK – so we’re saying that because one group of professionals wants to stay in the private sector, it follows that another group of professionals is absolutely right to want to stay nationalised.

Uh – right. Apart from the fact that this is also a bit of a non sequitur, it also undermines Goldacre’s position. Because if so many different professions would resist nationalisation, how can that make doctors so very, very right to demand to keep it? Unless doctors are super special and intelligent. Oh – Ben Goldacre’s a doctor. Of course. (Not exactly an ad hominem attack – see below. More about pointing out his own special interest here.)

4. And yet by 1948, 90% of doctors had signed on for the NHS.

Ah – the argumentum ad numerum. This is asserting that “the more people who support or believe a proposition, the more likely it is that that proposition is correct”. Which is also implied in the assumption that, just because all the medical professional associations now oppose them, the NHS reforms must be flawed.

It’s a cliche that, to get the medical profession to accept the NHS, the then health secretary Aneurin Bevan “stuffed their mouths with gold”. But there’s no indication it isn’t true. People go where the money is – hence the desirability of investment banking as a career pre-2008. It doesn’t mean that “where the money is” is a good, moral place to be. (See: investment banking.)

5. In 1940s, the tories voted against the NHS. Not once, but on the 2nd, and 3rd readings of the bill. The tories FULLY opposed the NHS.

But that was, you know, another world nearly SIXTY years ago. When we had food rationing. And ruled India. And mostly thought black people weren’t really human. Uh. What’s the point I’m making here?

Oh, yes – it’s probably an argumentum ad odium – the attempt to win favour for an argument by exploiting existing feelings of hostility in the opposing party (in this case, the Tories). Also a bit of argumentum ad populum (appealing to the people or gallery because, as we all know, everyone hates the Tories).

And this is really a non sequitur too. Is Goldacre saying that because the Tories totally opposed the NHS in the 1940s, they would automatically want to wreck it now? That’s simply not demonstrated.

And it flies in the face of the other arguments here (or, really, “arguments”, as they don’t make a lot of sense, logically speaking). If the medical profession reversed its stance on the NHS after it was introduced, why can’t a modern political party have changed its position on the NHS since the 1940s?

There’s also Goldacre’s cunning use of the term “moronic” to colour our perception of Burns’ comment. This is a subtle abusive argumentum ad hominem – by refusing to accept a statement, and justifying the refusal by criticising the person who made the statement. I mean, he must be a moron if his arguments are moronic, right? So there’s no need to listen to him.

All this is not to take any position on the NHS reforms themselves. They may be repulsive, badly constructed and damaging – or entirely necessary and liberating. Or all of the above. Or none. Frankly with all the toing and froing and amendments – and the sheer size of the bill – I have no idea what I think about it all.

Goldacre’s post may be emotive and seem compelling – but it does a poor job of presenting real arguments.


* Also, why SEO-fixated headlines like this also don’t tend to make much sense. Sorry.

Please direct all debate about the logical fallacies made in this post to the comments section. Thank you.

December 13, 2011

The future of media: drone journalism

We use them to help take out the Taliban’s leadership (with more or less accuracy) – but there is a more noble potential mission for the unmanned reconnaissance aircraft. Yes – drone journalism.

Get those radio-controlled suckers in the air and use their onboard cameras to help the fourth estate carry out its role to inform and serve the public.

It’s already happening – the Drone Journalism Lab at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln’s College of Journalism and Mass Communications is already expecting its first drone to practice highly targeted attack journalism at a range of targets.

Could this be the exciting future for hackery? Not probably for the kind of trade journalism you’ll see referred to in Freelance Unbound.

But I have to say, when I first saw the story I thought it was going to be about unmanned drones writing journalism. Which might improve the quality sometimes, I suppose…

December 6, 2011

Sorry – THIS is the idiotic spam email of the week…

The offer from “Whitney Meyer” of $50 for a spam link in a post specifically saying I am not interested in taking money for spam links was good. But “Carrie Oakley” has gone one better.

She picked the post I used to say Whitney was an idiot for picking such an inappropriate post as her chosen vehicle for a plug for her – no doubt fictional – “online university site”.

I created an Online University site called [REDACTED]. It serves as a great resource for new students looking to find all the info they need on getting an online degree.

Would you be interested in accepting a guestpost from me on your page of http://freelanceunbound.com/2011/12/05/idiotic-spam-email-of-the-week/ ? I will be happy to write an article about any topic that you would like.  It will only be used on your website.

I would put my link at the bottom of the article so that regular readers of your site who enjoyed my article might follow the link back to my site and find it informative as well.

I would certainly appreciate any opportunity to write an article. Feel free to suggest an idea, or if you prefer I can just come up with one.

Thanks for your time!

Carrie Oakley

Yes – could you write me a guest post on why your automated spamming software could not pick a more suitable target “Carrie”?

It’s all going so meta that I can barely understand it myself. Back to some real media content soon…

December 5, 2011

Idiotic spam email of the week

Just arrived in the Freelance Unbound inbox – an almost irresistible offer from “Whitney Meyer” for inserting spam links into this very blog.

Dear Freelance Unbound,

I just got done reading your “Bribery and corruption? Sadly, I think you have the wrong blog…” and I found it really interesting! Do you do advertising? I’m marketing out a few sites and can pay you $50 via PayPal to add a text link into one of your older posts. The link would go to an education site and I’d make sure the link relates to your post’s content.

Thanks and let me know if we can work something out!

Whitney Meyer

Of all the posts you could have chosen, Whitney, that one is the single most inappropriate. It almost makes me think you are being ironic in a kind-of post-modern meejah way.

Almost…

December 4, 2011

Remembrance Day still matters to Farnham residents

Nearly a century after the end of World War One, Farnham residents believe Poppy Day has as much relevance to them and their children as ever, while young British men and women fight abroad for their country.

Jack Keene reports for UCA Journalism News.

[NB: so, that Posterous syndication is still working, then. I thought I had turned it off. Test video embed for first year journalism students]